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Monday, March 07, 2005

aise hi

Tere pass aakar lagta hai mujhko aise,
ki gazal ghalib ne kahin keh di ho jaise,
meri aankhen tumhain dekhti hain aise,
chandra ko bhi chakor nahin dekhta hai waise.

Tera naam hardum mujhe sunayi deta hai aise,
mere dil ki dhadkan main tum bas gayi ho jaise,
tujhe dekh kar madhosh hota hoon aise,
madhu-shala main haalaa pee le ho waise.

There are the verses i wrote today in my lecture today...
Not that i did not listen to the lecture... i did.. just that when my prof was repeating few things he had said earlier.. i wrote this..
Now i know how somethings are written..
You feel it all the time and then you write it at once...

5 Comments:

At 5:00 PM, March 07, 2005, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Wow, nice lines I must say. Good work!

 
At 8:25 PM, March 07, 2005, Blogger Ravi Dixit said...

thanks for appritation..
mr/ms/mrs anonymous

 
At 9:43 PM, March 07, 2005, Blogger Phoenix said...

Ravi dear...ye kiska asar hai, ye kiska hai karnama, zara huma bhi batao kisne tumhe yoon ashiq hai banaya

"you feel it ALL the time"
..ahem ahem....:P

anyway jokes apart, real good work dude..u've started givin me a complex...there is still a little meter-problem at soem places, but u're improvin very fast..
keep writin, and keep showin me..

And good that u finally started goin to lecs, for watever productive reasons;)

 
At 10:24 PM, March 07, 2005, Blogger Ravi Dixit said...

kiddo
mujhe yeh to batao ki woh
".there is still a little meter-problem at some places"
kya hain nahin to main improvise kaise karoonga...
yeh tumhara hi asar hai jo main likh raha hoon...
saara shrey tumko jaata hai...
you are my inspiration... tumne josh dila diya hai...
tum aise baat karti ho to lagta hai ki likhna asaan hai... you make it
look so simple
good..
mistakes, tips aur suggestions zarror batana...
ab shagird hoon tumhara to tumko itna pain to lena hi padega
ravi

 
At 9:54 PM, March 22, 2005, Blogger night in shining armour said...

Hey Ravi..this is Bachi..
good work though i agree with envisager!
meter thoda fast ghoom raha nothing more...;-)

 

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